
| August 2004 | Café Society's Poetry News Update |
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| Born Liverpool 4/12/27, "not quite dead yet" he says. Eleven years in two orphanages, then first job (6 months) clog maker and boot repairer Scotland Road, Liverpool; last job (40 years) with the Civil Aviation Authority, mostly installation of long-distance Radar, all over the place. Education: basic elementary, but improved at Night School. Hooked on poetry and music at about aged 8 years. Married twice; this one in it's 34th wonderful year. Two children: 29 and 30. Leisure interests: Cruising under sail (current boat Europa 240). Writing: poetry, adult and childrens’ short stories, (some adult stories and poetry published). Reading: especially Patrick O’Brian. Cross-country walking. Music: 40s big bands, classics (choral, Wagner, Delius). Art: Art Noveau, Art Deco. Drinking: Lots of red wine.
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I have attempted the mysterious free form but thrice, and only one of these attempts I think can be viewed with any satisfaction i.e Halloween Midnight. Free form devotees often propose highly poetic subjects and sentiments but can rarely mount a credible defence of why their lines begin and end as they do: perhaps the fault is mine. It is a pity that the style is almost universally adopted by the commercial poets and it is an axiom amongst many of my acquaintances that if it rhymes or scans, don't bother to send it in for the big bucks competitions. I'm all for the singing line.
Harping back to the previous question, I worked to no mathematical theory but in the finished article I feel the lines are comfortable with one another and are worthy of a public airing.
If one lives in a house for thirty odd years one can walk about in its comfortable embrace with ones eyes shut, therefore when answering the calls of nature at night we have no need of light. The second condition for the poem's naissance was that although my convinced agnostic mind rejects a bewhiskered God that can be influenced by singing and grovelling to, my poor human heart, filled with love for my dear Suzy desperately longs for a here-after to make sense of the present. This sentiment is expressed in the line of the poem under discussion 'And long to hear the rustle of the grave clothes' The poem was inspired while answering, at midnight, the call of nature in pitch darkness on the eve of All Hallows.
I've built myself a God, omnipresent, omnipotent and omniscient, whose presence will appear in the next question.
The competition was free and the winning prizes, in true Scottish fashion were not intmidating, so I thought this is for me. I am a member of the Downlanders Group and the current task was to write a poem concerned with the trauma of being dispossessed of house and home and coincidently, I was reading at the time and account of a sailing circumnavigation of Great Britain by Libby Purves entitled, 'A Summers Grace'. Libby had got to Tobermory and opposite at Morven was a memorial to the highland clearances, I think, known as the White Cottages. She discussed at some length the terror of being thrown out of ones home at any hour of the day or night and being forced to board grim emigrant ships for Newfoundland. I thought, this is the stuff of poetry and the result was well received, so I popped it off to Scotland.
The many thousands of entries where whittled down to a few finalists by the Burns Club of Irvine, Scotland, and all finalists were awarded a 'Certificate of Excellence' and invited to pop up to Irvine to collect it and say your piece in front of an audience of finalists and friends. The popping up set me back about £200 but it was worth it just to say my piece in front of a knowledgeable crowd of about two hundred: applause is very addictive. The winning poems chosen by a professional were the usual free verse. Oddly enough the judge wondered why there were so few humorous entries, I'll try some giggles of mine next time.
I always treat sex with some humour as I believe it's one of the funniest things a joking God has wished on us bipeds. I think I've only used the F word once and it made a very telling line.
Poetry L & T: How and why did you first start writing poetry, Tom?
Tom: My computer dates the earth shattering event precisely. It was 13. 10. 95 and it was in course of joining the small group which was the precursor of the official East Grinstead Poets (nee Library Poets). I blush to look at the original but it was a good try and well received at the time.
Poetry L & T: Who are your favourite poets?
Tom: Yeats certainly, with a name like Riley and way back originally from Waterford, R.O.I., W.B. is a natural and fills a mystical gap in my rather barren agnostic soul. Elizabeth Barrett Browning for steaming passion and Burns for fun: I'm fond of reading poetry and prose in the vernacular being a devotee of Niel Munro and, having spent a huge portion of my working life in Scotland, I'm o'er fond of the place.
Poetry L & T: You show a general love of (and skill with) rhyme in your work. In which ways do you feel free verse compares less favourably with rhymed, metred poetry?
Tom: Oh dear! here we tread upon marshy ground. Frankly I don't understand it as, when trying to read it, it feels like rushing down a flight of stairs with some steps missing: surely poetry should be the music of words. The human mind requires order, and with the discipline of form and if appropriate the ornament of rhyme, reception by eye or ear of a well crafted piece should engender a mood of elation in the brain and an almost post-coitus like satisfaction.
Poetry L & T: I enjoy the mysterious atmosphere of your poem "Halloween Midnight", especially in the second stanza, where you "smile at remembered terrors of the flowering years"... what kinds of things used to scare you, as a boy?
Tom: In the flowering years I was brought up in two orphanages, a devout and strict Catholic - see 'Sanctuary' - and I can assure you it is the finest cure for religion there is. It terrified me and I'm sure that the brutality exercised in that supposedly worthy end would fill the jails in this, more child caring age. All Hallows e'en of my school days was a hair crawling wait for the apparition of the roaming spirits and a dread of the eternal flames.
Poetry L & T: "Forever Yours" is a poem I heard for the first time when you read it out at a recent meeting of East Grinstead Poets. It's become a favourite of mine now. Did the inspiration start with one memorable line, or grow from several ideas?
Tom: No not a line, but a fervent hope to continue forever the love Suzy and I share. It is my firm conviction that the universe is recycled periodically by the all pervading force of my Big G, Gravity and being sensible of a modification of Darwin's theories, I propose that the events that happen are the only events that can happen and therefore the whole social evolution will be as before, perhaps with minor modifications: comforting anyway.
Poetry L & T: You received an award in the Scottish International Open Poetry Competition with your poem "A Morven flitting". I very much enjoyed reading that, and would love to know more about the historical story behind it.
Tom: The award is the most expensive piece of paper I own and it was like this.
Poetry L & T: You have a love of the sea and sailing, which features in much of your work. Do you find you get some of your best ideas for poems while sailing?
Tom: While one is sailing one thinks about sailing, the integrity of ones hide depends largely on keeping ones mind on the continually changing equation of wind, sea, and often on human endurance but, while swinging round the hook! Some fine stanzas have been produced while at anchor but rarely of sailing subjects. At least I've celebrated the magic of the thin grey line and the team work of sailing in the poem, 'Landfall', which describes a fairly average Channel crossing to Cherbourg.
Poetry L & T: Are there any subjects you find difficult, emotionally, to write about?
Tom: No. I've written on mental isolation almost to breakdown and rescue by the birth of my daughter but, tackling the desertion of myself by my first wife required the passing of some thirty years to see the incidents clearly and even extract some humour from it: at the time the desire was only to cut the fat cuckoo's throat and I didn't see it as the merciful release from a marriage going nowhere and the start of thirty four wonderful years with Suzy. I think the business is fairly covered in 'A Trying Time'.
Poetry L & T: What do you think poets might do to make poetry more popular again, as it was many years ago?
Tom: More poets should refrain from spilling their poetical intestines on the floor and try interesting simple forms and rhyme, the sonnet is a beauty. More quietly witty and humorous verse should be attempted; 'Cash' and 'A Late Knight' always go down very well when performed and above all, learn to speak clearly and address ones poetical remarks to the back of the hall don't mumble. Be proud of your babies and get that feeling across.
Poetry L & T: Do you think that the Internet can sometimes encourage poets to become too solitary, rather than going to poetry groups?
Tom: That's a very difficult question. The successful creation of a poem is a marvellous feeling and if shared with like minded people it is like that Shakespearian quality of the stuff that droppeth as the gentle rain, it is twice blessed. I cannot imagine a poet who only wishes to cast his work adrift like a note laden bottle into the sea, most poets, even those shy of the podium would give their ears to see their work in a decent anthology or magazine. Incidentally I publish my own little anthologies from time to time, it's great fun.
Poetry L & T: Do you think poets should aspire to greatness, or simply write for the enjoyment of it?
Tom: One should write for the sheer joy of the thing, I find the process exhilarating, and it also serves a very useful purpose at my time of life - the down slide to eighty - hopefully staving off the inevitable process of my brains turning to jelly. I've had reasonable success in local competitions and some publishing in national poetry magazines, but if greatness should be thrust upon me which I doubt very much, it will be a great giggle.
Poetry L & T: Finally, Tom, what are your ambitions for the future?
Tom: To get another poetry anthology out, to publish my illustrated short stories for children, to win that Scottish Open, and to stay alive.
Poetry L & T: Thank you for the interview, Tom.
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| Dear Poets, Welcome to the August 2004 issue of Poetry Life & Times (For those of you reading this on a mirror site and not poetrylifeandtimes.com, click here).
This month's interview features Tom Riley, founder member of East Grinsted Poets (Ex Libris), whose rich, evocative poetry is often my favourite in that group.
Featured Poets this month include Barbara Crooker, Guy Kettelhack, Jim Dunlap, Deborah P Kolodji, Richard Vallance and Jan Sand. Be sure to scroll down after reading Barbara Crooker's poems, to read the exciting news about her new chapbook, Impressionism.
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In the Vallance Review for August 2004, Richard's Review No. 36 features the first sonnet in "Sonnets and Other Lyrics" (1917), a collection of 34 sonnets by Rober Silliman Hillyer.
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My own poetry can be found mainly on AuthorsDen, these days. The links in the left-hand column of my pages include books and articles as well as poetry. Some of the articles give advice on making chapbooks, or finding publishers - and there is even an item on ghosts.
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Poetry submissions should be in plain text in the body of an email, with a small jpeg author picture attached, also a bio, with the URLs of any ezines mentioned, so that they can be shown as links. This increases the chance of inclusion, especially for late submissions. Pictures are best at a maximum of 520 pixels across, otherwise they take ages to arrive by email, especially in bitmap or TIFF format. I recommend that poets click the submissions link on our main page, for full guidelines, and please, always use a spellchecker.
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Richard Vallance reviews sonnets, both classic and modern.
Featured Poets this month include Barbara Crooker, Guy Kettelhack, Jim Dunlap, Deborah P Kolodji, Richard Vallance and Jan Sand. Many thanks to all contributors.
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![]() BARBARA CROOKER The author of almost 900 poems published in over 100 anthologies and prestigious magazines, along with 8 residencies at the VCCA; Barbara Crooker's work has made her one of Pennsylvania's favorite poets. She is the recipient of numerous awards and recognitions, including three Pennsylvania Council on the Arts Creative Writing Fellowships, five residencies at the Virginia Center for the Creative Arts, and a prize from the NEA. A three-time nominee for the Pushcart Prize, she was nominated for the 1997 Grammy Awards for her part in the audio version of the popular anthology, Grow Old Along With Me--The Best is Yet to Be (Papier Mache Press). More recent news - Barbara won the 2001 Byline Press Chapbook Competition with her book "Ordinary Lives". She has also had a brilliant new collection of poems published called "The White Poems" - visit the Irish site Electric Acorn to read three poems from this collection. A new poem "Wedding Blessing" published in Wedding Blessings a book of Prayers, Poems, and Toasts Celebrating Love, Marriage, and Anniversaries Compiled by June Cotner (Broadway Books, $16.00 hardcover, ISBN 0-7679-1346-9) Barbara also has a new book out by Pudding House Publications: Greatest Hits - see announcement lower down the page in this issue. See also publisher's websites for more on Barbara: Miller's Pond and H&H Press.
To read our November '99 interview with Barbara Crooker -
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GUY KETTELHACK
Guy Kettelhack is the author or coauthor of more than 30 nonfiction books. His poetry has been featured in Outstretch, Van Gogh's Ear, Melic Review, Triplopia and New Pleiades. A poem "Alter Ego" was selected as a quarterfinalist in the 2004 Lyric Recovery Competition and two other poems won awards in the IBPC Competition (January and May 2004). He lives in New York City.
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JIM DUNLAP
(Rhyme Master)Jim is in the Marquis, Who's Who In America and will be in the Marquis Who's Who In The World in it's next edition as well. He is also in the Directory of American Poets and Fiction Writers.
His list of publications include "Candelabrum", "Plainsongs" and the "Paris/ Atlantic"; and he is now (or has been) online at "Die Niderngasse", "Poetry Repair Shop", "Midnight Edition" and Poetry Life & Times". He is a resident poet, and an Alpha poet at the Poet's Porch, and has had about six hundred poems published to date. He has been in the Writer's Digest top 100 three times, although he doesn't usually enter their contests any more, as their entry fees have gone out of sight. However, he has decided to send a single poem this time. He is currently the newsletter editor for the Des Moines Area Writers' Network.
His work also appears online at:
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http://www.aceonline.com.au/~db/
http://www.valmagnuson.com/
on Describe_Adonis in the Yahoo groups,
poetryrepairs.com
and in a number of other places as well.
Liberty In Shadow © Jim Dunlap
A colossus, mounting horizons sere, she stands, brazen and courageous, The points of her crown glisten against a hazy backdrop of leaden air Her upraised arm presents a torch to light the world. Spotlights play across enormous breasts, outline the layered fall of her dress, and paint chiaroscuro bars across her brow. The frothy sweep of water limns a carpet at her feet, and the city buildings form a ragged wall surrounding her, burdening her, exploiting her. The shade of Emma Lazarus moans, bereft of hope. Yet this lady's standing still, her pride defies her enemies, embeds cold iron in her back, cries with her at trust betrayed, yet vain thus far her search for honor, though not wholly lost: Mankind’s hope, first Tuesday come November. written for a challenge on http://www.About.com "A Horse, A Horse, Of Course, Of Course" © Jim Dunlap
"For horses, horse flies, For humans, shame",* But horses don't kill off The halt and the lame. It's apples and oranges. My, what a surprise. Horses don't deal in Deception ... and lies. Just stop and think. A no-brainer ... of course. To have a clear conscience, One needs be a horse. * from a poem by Jane Hirshfield My Unrealized Diary * © Jim Dunlap
I’ve never really believed in diaries. They are too personal, and leave you too vulnerable. What happens if someone steals your diary? What happens if someone sneaks a peek? If I’d kept a diary when I was a boy, and my father had found it .. I might not be alive today. I know that God doesn’t answer your prayers. I prayed that my father would stop being a monster when I was young and naive. God must have chuckled at that one. He even half-assed answered it, 55 years too late. My father is no longer a monster, now that he is 83 (or so it appears now). He’s got religion and he’s a deacon in the local born again church. Very convenient, I must admit. Anne Frank did believe in diaries. Hers is famous throughout the world. It lays out the life story, short as it was, of a young girl who believed in goodness and in hope. I wonder if any of those victims of genocide had diaries similar to Anne Frank’s. I wonder if any one really cares. I’ve never really believed in diaries. But I’m glad Anne did.
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