Sometimes people ask me why I write poetry. Although I often get
"paid" for a poem, the amount is usually so negligible that it is barely
worth a cup of coffee at Starbucks.
Then, something like this happens.....
Earlier this year, I wrote a poem called "The Peace Rose". I wrote it
for a contest - the contest objective was to write a poem on a
historical theme. Meanwhile I posted it to one of my poetry lists. I didn't
win that contest, but then recently I entered it in another (The Florida
State Poetry Association's Annual contest in the cinquain sequence
category) where I won 3rd place and $10. This is itself is nice, but not a
reason for writing poetry.
But then, today I received an e-mail from a woman in the UK that I've
never met, a woman who was originally born in France. Here is the
excerpt from her e-mail that touched me:
"and whilst i'm talking to you, something i've wanted to share with you
for a very long time.
Quite a while ago, months!, you'd written something about the Peace
Rose. I did not comment at the time as i seldom do, but had done research
and found out they originated in a town not so far to where i was born,
well what's a hundred miles!!! The name of that town held magic for me
when i was a child as some distant relatives lived there though i've
never been there: Tassin la demi-lune, which translated is more or less
Tassin the half-moon.... bearing in mind it sounds obviously to me much
nicer in my native tongue.
I'm just back from that trip 'home' to see my ailing father... i did
revisit the cemetary on the morning of the All Saints... such a bright
sight with so much chrysanthemums on all tombs... a lot of them gold! a
festival i've not taken part in since an adolescent. Monday i went early
before visitors gathered there... a solitary celebration nonetheless.
But more over, the map i was handed in at the airport when collecting
the rental car, had Tassin la demi-lune staring at me everytime i used
it, and everytime i remembered your Peace Rose. This is just a tiny
example of how other people's poetry reaches.... even if i hardly if ever
comment."
I was blown away by this - I've never been to France, never been to the
UK, never met this woman - yet she was traveling through France and it
made her think of my poem. This is why I write poetry and try to
publish it.
Here's my "Peace Rose" poem:
The Peace Rose
Carmine
on the edges
of ivory petals -
French-nurtured from a single seed.
Blood-brushed
escape
from World War II -
seedlings on the last plane
before Nazi Occupation.
The smell
of peace
still years away,
yet growing with pale gold,
red-tipped full blooms in foreign fields,
gardens.
Treaties
signed, gold medals
earned - as Peace is planted
in our yards, in our land, we spread
its hope.
© Deborah P. Kolodji 2004